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Submitted: July 18, 2009
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~Ayavaron Oct 8, 2009 Student Traditional Artist

I know I'm late to the game of critiquing this but I've gotta say that while three of these four are lovely, well-composed and have great colors, I can't tell what's supposed to be happening in the top-right one. It fails to communicate to me.

On to further praising, I love the expression of the old man in the lower left and the way the lines flow into each other in the lower right one creates an incredible dynamism. Lower right is easily the best of the bunch. It looks like you put the most work into that one too.

~Caleb-Brown May 26, 2010

It's a closeup of the girl walking forward
The top starts right below her boobs
then there is her corset/belt thing right below that
and her dress is flowing in the wind
To the left is her arm and her sleeve flowing in the wind

I think it was done well
I didn't have any problem realizing what it was
i don't mean to sound like an A-hole by the way, i'm just saying